Assignment #4 Revisions

• My final paper is kind of different from my rough draft. After writing first draft I read over my essay, improved my grammatical mistakes and get ride of unnecessary sentences and statements.

• I reread my work previously to improve my essay’s organization, errors and main focuses.  I also think in the paper I supported my thesis statement and I tried not to be off the topic.

• After revising my paper I noticed some grammar errors, which I tried to rewrite.  I know that my weak side is run-on sentences. 

• I knew I had some mistakes that I had to correct after writing first rough draft. The peer review was kind of helpful thing that guided me to look for some improvements in my paper.

• I think I wrote clearly and enough vivid details. The strongest side of this paper might be the organization of materials that I wrote in one place and tried not to jump one place to another. I also tried not to repeat a point more than once. My weakest side can be grammatical mistakes, which I tried to improve.